Okay, I could seriously write a novel with this line, so I'm going to run full-steam with it and post whenever I hit about 500 words. I know I don't really need this much punctuation, but it's there for the rhythm I wanted. Feel free to change/leave the comma's out if you prefer, as well, you know you can change the sentence/tense/whatever.
There was only water, and then, a small raft.
good morning
ReplyDeletemorning!
DeleteHmmm. I might be able to work that into a dream sequence ... the one MC does need to drown at some point.
ReplyDeleteOhhh! drowning! ...not enough to kill the MC though? near-drowning?
DeleteWell, enough to meet his death; 200 words of it done on phone so far; will format and fix later :)
DeleteI have an idea but don't know when will write it
ReplyDeletewhenever you do, post away!
DeleteI did it! Waaaahahahahaaaaaa!! Late, of course (I'm Mexican), but I wrote my Fri Fic :D Yay me!
ReplyDeleteGuilie @ Flash Fiction Friday