Friday, March 7, 2014

Only water

Happy March!

Okay, I could seriously write a novel with this line, so I'm going to run full-steam with it and post whenever I hit about 500 words. I know I don't really need this much punctuation, but it's there for the rhythm I wanted. Feel free to change/leave the comma's out if you prefer, as well, you know you can change the sentence/tense/whatever.

There was only water, and then, a small raft.


  1. Hmmm. I might be able to work that into a dream sequence ... the one MC does need to drown at some point.

    1. Ohhh! drowning! ...not enough to kill the MC though? near-drowning?

    2. Well, enough to meet his death; 200 words of it done on phone so far; will format and fix later :)

  2. I have an idea but don't know when will write it

  3. I did it! Waaaahahahahaaaaaa!! Late, of course (I'm Mexican), but I wrote my Fri Fic :D Yay me!
    Guilie @ Flash Fiction Friday